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Might be good to spell out GDPR (seems like it wasn’t mentioned before in earlier paragraphs). 

Seems like only paragraph 131 mentions private sector. But all paragraphs after under this main header did not explicitly mention about private sector’s role. Proposing perhaps to update overall header for paragrahs 131-146

See comments in paragraph 112, as it relates to 115. Both parts from 112 and 115 might fit better under this subheader. 

This seems to be related to paragraph 104 on elections, might be worth to have content shifted along paragraph 104, or integrate content. 

Proposing to move 2nd half of this paragraph starting “Thus, a regional approach is necessary…” to after paragraph 115. That might flow better in terms of discussing multistakeholder regional collaboration.